Visually cluttered (that vent in the lower right corner, the door breaking up the background, the blurry foreground. Nothing particularly interesting about this scene. It shows a habit but not in a new or interesting way.
Good selection of point of view. More depth of field is required to make this angle work though; The blurred foreground is a distraction. Would also be nice if the chairs were aligned to create a repeating pattern.
I know what you are trying to convey, but the image lacks punch. the dof is lacking, the out of focus chairs need cropping out. The lighting is awful and needs some external light source.