I love palms! I think if they were a little closer together in relation to the space surrounding them, they would appear as a subject of focus together better. I would like to see the colors brightened/saturated more deeply and a littler sharper focus.
Composition is great but the image quality is poor. Focus is not crisp and the image seems to have a lot of noise. An early morning or sunset photo might look better with the muted sunlight. Still a good effort.
Is the subject the space between the 2 trees? "the main subject is dead center" is what it is supposed to be, as in 1 subject in the middle, my eyes are drawn off center by the two trees.