The busy blanket has too much in the frame, and distracts from the subjects. Id suggest filling more of the frame with the book, glasses and cup, even if it meant cropping out some of the book. Also some focus problems.
bedspread looks more like tablecloth than anything else, and the coffee is down-played so much that I only went searching for it after reading the title.
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