This would really be better if you reshoot and did a number of things. The firs tthing is to set your aperture at about f/8 and make sure the focus is spot on so as to get the best focus possible. Then, in photoshop, sharpen it ever so slightly and remove the yellowish cast by using either the channel mixer or colr balance. I really think this photo has a lot of potential and I appreciate the subtle message that it sends. Hope this helps some.
Interesting idea - nice effect to use tungsten lighting. The shallow DoF makes it a bit difficult to read - and the bright spots in the background draw unnecessary attention.
man! making me think i need to fix that at my house!... nice composition but wouldn't have a clue without the title even then a little difficult segway negligence of fixing a faucet with negligence in a generic/general/habitual way....maybe i'm going easy on myself