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the composition is very cluttered. Particularly unfortunate is the coffee cup in front of the windows. They sort of run together and flatten out your perspective. I wonder if it would have been better to crop in very close to your center of interest, even to the point of cropping off the top of his head, the left shoulder to the neck, and everything to the right of the fingers. This would flatten the whole thing, and the coffee cup would be less distracting. |
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