This striking geometric coincidence is so unusual and even improbable, that it is somehow let down a little by the very bottom bit being so ordinary. But then again, maybe that's a good thing? Maybe the outrageous optimism of the top 95% needs the other 5% just to remind us that no matter how divine and celestial a thing appears to be, it's all just man's works in the end. 9.
I love abstract architecture shots and this is a really cool one. I love how the contrail somehow becomes part of the architecture. I like the gradient sky too.
With this image being all about straight lines, I think it needs a stronger solid vertical or horizontal to anchor it - I can see that you have matched it to the black white interface mid-bottom, but the right hand vertical has such a close relationship with the right hand border that the non-parallelism here really stands out. Don't get me wrong, I really like the image, I just think it looks a bit out of whack as presented.