A great shot, you must have a lot of patience! I'm impressed that you got all of them in focus. It's a pity about the shadow across the right side, it's the only thing that takes away from it. 8
Lovely subject! What works here: The shadow on the right is heavy on the overall composition, but it's rescued somewhat by the light on the fly in the upper right corner. The well focused fly in the center keeps me from being too distracted by the motion blur of the one near to the right. I have no suggestions for improvement--you chose a difficult subject and made a very nice image of it!
The opposites being she and hes? NIce capture of the queue of males. The dark shadow that is fallingon he right and the number of over esposed areas detract from an otherwise very interesting shot.