I like your idea, but I think the background isn't 'still' enough: there's too much going on in terms of trees, lampposts and vans. You could maybe have made the silence a little more poignant by having a lone figure (in baseball/football outfit) leaving the field. Maybe a little lower vantage point. Of course, if it hadn't been basic editing, you could've worked with the colors to make it a feel more deserted, too.
But look who's talking: haven't posted a single picture here, still trying to muster the courage ;-) This picture did capture my imagination though, thanks. |