I can see what your doing here, but I it just doesnt look right. the light is to harsh on her hair and to dull on the rest of her body. also, having just her torso and part of her leg in the shot kind of makes her pose look awkward.
So many images of a person pressing their forefinger to their lips in a shhhh gesture in this challenge. It does not convey a very strong feeling of "Silence" for me. It's more an admonition to be quit. Artistically rendered though. 5
The lighting really kills this one, I think. It comes across like you were trying to be edgy doing a nude, like that would 'make' the image (not saying that was you intention or thought, but that's how the image comes across to me). Compositionally, lighting wise, it just isn't working for me. : (
to me it seems you have stuck some naked female flesh in there just to get views. If you go to the effort in getting someone to strip, at least make an actual effort with the rest of the photo. the whole concept of this image is just poor.. sorry.
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