I"m probably going to get shot for this but I am having trouble telling which is which in this shot, I'm guessing the girl is on the left? Please tell the boy that I'm sorry but they both look like girls to me, sorry. The shot is a nice candid portrait, if they were both looking at the camera it would really hlep and I like the sepia tone of the shot. The darkness around the left eye of the person on the left, the shadow is a bit distracting Had this at a 4 but am bumping it to a 7
Lines on the bricks appear to be tilting up to the left. I like the coloration; there are some "hot" spots on the skin and the entirety of the shirts that could be toned down a bit.