I don't think you had a bad idea, at least i admire a close-up like this, i think it's a nice abstract.
I just think that the white levels are too harsh, what even makes the object almost unidentified. Again, i think you had a nice idea with the abstract but you crop doesn't justify for me too, i don't think the white spaces are well organized, too much at the left and a little one at the top right. I think some nice and bright colors at the silver part would be nice.
Just trying to help, because you asked on a thread. I hope i wasn't rude, i'm not experient but i try to help!
PS: I saw the pp you did on a portrait at your portfolio (making the lady look younger). Woa! It's really great!
Message edited by author 2009-08-18 12:07:59. |
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