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Comments Made During the Challenge
05/18/2004 11:46:08 PMPost actions
Very nice subject and composition. The light is a little harsh and the highlight is a bit distracting.
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05/17/2004 01:42:26 PMPost actions
Could have increased DOF for whole shot so all is in focus.
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05/16/2004 09:37:04 AMPost actions
Nice shot. WIth a little work I think you could have a winning photo here...
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05/16/2004 07:57:31 AMPost actions
Neat idea, bu tI think it would be more effective if you moved further out so that the details were not quite as clear. Make the viewer have to look twice to see that the checkerboard is made up of candy. Good effort. 7
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05/14/2004 04:15:30 PMPost actions
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05/14/2004 08:33:49 AMPost actions
Interesting concept. The image is a bit dark in the upper left and a little out of focus in the front center.
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05/13/2004 09:06:40 PMPost actions
If you used your flash, you were too close, or it probably would have looked better if you cropped off the darker areas on top and on the sides.
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05/13/2004 06:54:12 PMPost actions
shame about the finger prints
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05/13/2004 12:39:33 PMPost actions
next time avoid using flash for such distances.
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05/13/2004 12:50:15 AMPost actions
Wow, I could really go for some chocolate right now.
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05/13/2004 12:09:22 AMPost actions
Using the flash attached to your camera makes the background look dark and gloomy. Otherwise, nicely composed and processed.
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05/12/2004 08:22:26 PMPost actions
Yummy...chocolate can't ever be wrong, can it?
Wish the candies were more symmetrically aligned; I like the DOF.
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05/12/2004 06:15:46 PMPost actions
dirty picture, not well arranged, visible fingerprints on the chocolats... good idea but needs work
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05/12/2004 03:38:35 PMPost actions
Looks yummy, but what is opposite?
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05/12/2004 01:31:51 PMPost actions
The light drop off from front to back is killing this image. The perspective doesn't help either.
I would have 'cleaned' the chocs too - specs of dark choc on white etc just make it look messy.
Sorry
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05/12/2004 08:19:33 AMPost actions
Lighting could use some work, it would have been nice to have the squares a bit more neatly arranged.
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