The image does convey some feeling of silence in a way but does not really tell me much else. I just see a single candle burning and the title suggests it's in memory of something or someone. I feel that somehow you could maybe have included something else in the picture such as for instance a blurred face, a ring, a person or something that would create a link to what the memory is that the title refers to. On it's own like this it does not have much impact. 5
I like the flair coming off the flame, that's really cool! The pixelated ares around it are pretty distracting though, and the background isn't going all the way black, which is again a distraction.