I dunno if you could have just worked the angle a little to get the sign completely in the frame, to me it's just all too a little unfinnished. first off the fountain is incomplete, the antique sign is cut off, the sign off in the shadows is half off, I see half a bush behind the fountain it all distracts me from you focal pointwhich is too bad caus it seems lkike a really interesting subject...
Good luck,
Eric... |