A couple of thoughts about your entry.
I think the composition is pretty solid with the centered face - i just wish the sides of the hands were not cropped quite as tight.
The model's face is very pretty and I think you did a great job with capturing good skin tones on the hands - but the skin just below her eyes is a bit pinkish/purple - likely due to processing. I personally like the super blue eyes and red lips, but i wonder how well it will sit with others.
I think the jacket is one of the big problems - it is sooo busy that it distracts fro the glasses
I think the image is a bit soft and that probably cost you a bit as well and even though the glasses are white, the image does almost seem to come across as have a slightly yellow tint...but I have no idea why!
I like your model - very pretty - you need to use her more often - just put her in a bit better lighting and either get closer so you don't have to crop so much, or crop her wider.
I hope it helps! |