The idea you had was good, however the end product does not appeal. The out of focus frames across the lens, then combined with the glasses frames, makes distracting lines that confuse...
2 minor points though; 1) the red/white/blue strap is distracting because it adds other colours to a relatively simple image and 2) if the image were flipped to make the wording on the camera normal it would be easier on the eye.