I think it's tough to for a picture like this to stand out, especially in this type of challenge. In yours, I'm having trouble finding the focal point, which distracts me.
Love the lighting...warm glow and nice contrasts! The focus seems a little "shallow" (ie: more toward the front but, seemingly still a bit oof) but, perhaps, that's what you meant it to be? (commenting only)
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