nice idea here. I think the depth of field is off. It either needed to be shallower (making the rear closes futher OOF) or deeper, keeping all in focus. At this point, the rear glasses just look soft
In a shot like this, I almost kind of WANT to see more shadow play. The alternating lines down the vertical would really have been strengthened by it more.
Don't you just love the 80's style that we all used to wear? HUGE glasses that filled our entire faces? That's what this reminds me of. Really cool shot. Simple but effective and still interesting.