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05/18/2004 01:43:44 PMPost actions
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05/18/2004 08:53:33 AMPost actions
I like this...I think it could be better by a bit more contrast, it appears a bit bright to me. Also the near subject could be cropped a bit left...I would like to see here see the chop more centered on her and less of a crop on the right as the far subject is too crowded in the frame and maybe just a little more definition on the far subject as well. Great idea!
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05/18/2004 08:32:08 AMPost actions
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05/17/2004 11:28:20 PMPost actions
I really like this idea. I think a little wider DOF to make the person in the back a little clearer would make it stronger.
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05/17/2004 04:13:07 AMPost actions
This could be a great shot, but I feel its just a little to soft. I'd say work on it and you'll have a winner... good job on the idea!
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05/17/2004 01:56:44 AMPost actions
more DOF would have illustrated the point better.
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05/15/2004 10:26:07 AMPost actions
Very nice handling of your extreme depth of field. Great exposure on the close face - and a pretty one at that. The hair coming in from the top left leading you down to the eye is a GREAT touch. There are two suggestions for improvement: 1) The bight sky in the top right corner is unfortunate and 2) The reddish object to the left of the legs is a minor detractor.
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05/14/2004 08:32:02 PMPost actions
Love the idea! Background subject is too far out of focus. I would have tried a higher f-stop.
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05/14/2004 12:51:30 PMPost actions
Background is too out of focus - ditracting. Foreground feels washed out.
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05/13/2004 10:34:28 PMPost actions
ood lighting and good composition
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05/13/2004 12:44:03 PMPost actions
I think this would have worked better with a deep depth of field so that both subjects were in focus.
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05/13/2004 05:40:07 AMPost actions
Really nice image of opposites...I like the idea and the composition.
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05/13/2004 12:59:34 AMPost actions
increase DOF to bring rear subject into a little sharper focus, but not much.
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05/12/2004 03:56:41 PMPost actions
Very nice! And what beautiful eyes she has. I like your idea and I like the shot, I gave you an 8.
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05/12/2004 01:19:24 PMPost actions
This meets the challenge. The composition and colors are very nice This does not look like it was much fun for the children though. A 4.
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05/12/2004 01:00:03 PMPost actions
Very hard to see the boy in the distance. May have helped to move away just slightly to ensure the boy was not covered by the girl's hair.
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05/12/2004 08:09:40 AMPost actions
Skintone litle strange, too redish (needs more HUE). The eye has to be better focused. Othervise fine image and a good idea
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05/12/2004 12:36:23 AMPost actions
Lovely, simple idea. Nicely done.
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