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01/22/2009 09:19:46 PMPost actions
I really want to like this. The effort is good. I find that your model is too dark. A nice fill flash would work here or if not available, a levels adjustment on your model would help.
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01/22/2009 04:26:41 PMPost actions
This pic has a lot of potential. It has very nice composition and dof, but it is murky and could use some tweaking with the levels to make it really pop.
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01/21/2009 11:54:54 AMPost actions
She's a beauty for sure. Very nice shot but it's a little bit dark.
01/18/2009 08:33:08 PMPost actions
Very strong pose. The focus is a little soft, for me, on your model but it does give a kind of subtle approach. I like it. -BB
01/18/2009 04:18:25 PMPost actions
a very pretty model and a lovely background - but the lighting on the model seems too modest to really separate her and highlight her
01/18/2009 10:24:16 AMPost actions
seems a little soft on the face, nice candid shot though
01/17/2009 12:27:29 PMPost actions
a bit dark, up the brightness a bit...
01/17/2009 02:34:19 AMPost actions
A tad soft, and a tad dark, yet it works to convey an air of mystery. 7
01/16/2009 01:12:04 PMPost actions
seems a bit either out of focus or grainy. might be my eyes or my monitor, ill check back later. either way, i love the background bokeh