I like this best of the two you offer - something about the off-point sweet spot, like the viewer is absent-minded, gazing at the ground in a vain mental groping for a lost thought. Now ubique will come along and make a joke about "mental groping" ;)
Am torn between the 2 Amy, I like whats happening here but think I'm leaning to the other shot and seeing more of the tree, great sweet spot mind you and it sets the image off nicely.
Wonderful shot, one of the best I have seen with a lensbaby,. Love the colours, emotion, blur and the 'in focus' area really draws you in as though you are starting on a strange and crazy dream. Great!!!