Lovely pose and mood to this shot, love her expression and the way her hair is blowing in the wind. I like the way her hands are folded in front of her, I don't think it looks posed as all just a natural thing for a little girl to do. I gave you a 7 during voting as I really liked the shot. My only issue was the white around the eyes but still an overall good image. Without that it would have probably been a 10.
She leaned back against the fence, and the wind tossed her hair, and she scowled ever so slightly.
How dare they tease her so, those other girls. She tried so hard to be friendly, to get them to accept her, to not pull her hair and call her names and pinch and mock her.
She leaned back against the fence, and the wind tossed her hair, and her mind raced through ways of vengeance, of ways to get back at them, at fantasies of punishment for those horrible girls.
And as her mind raced, her eyes began to burn with an inner fire, and the wind whipped her hair even more, and a sly little grin began to mark her lips. Then, with a slight and almost imperceptible nod of her head, she stood up straight and tall, and walked off, a glow in her eyes, to find a power that had been hidden within, and to start on a path to a destiny that no-one could have forseen.
She certainly does look thoughtful, I like the black and white and the composition, but her face seems to have lost some detail, slightly plastic looking.