overall it's good but the far distance is sharper than the middle distance which makes it look slightly strange? Why not blur all of the BG? - good luck
A good environmental portrait. But unlucky? I wonder if he feels that way. Good use of thirds. A different conversion (more of the red channel?) might have better separated his tool from the background.
Would have scored higher if , some of the right side was cropped. This would take away some of the bright ( Bald ) sky. The bright Sky and the lines on the road, lead ones eyes away from the strong image of the Man.
Unlucky but still with a smile upon his face. That's impressive.
Like the detail in the man's face, with all the rinkles and all, and the composition.
Congrats!