Hmm ... not sure how I'm feeling about this. You have an interesting model. You've resisted the temptation to turn her skin to plastic. Fingernails raise all kinds of questions. And her oriental appeanance creates some tension with your title.All that's good in my book. This may be a case where a centered composition might have been better. It looks a little off balance in this one.
When you put a face right in front, and the focus is on the eyes, im sorry but there needs to be better focus everywhere. The out of focus hand and thumb is too distracting. But its still a super duper contender. GL/