Nice try. I wonder if you could have used some makeup (or something) to blend the paper to the hand for a more convincing illusion. If you had succeeded in creating the illusion of transparency, I think I would have given this a very high vote. As it is, It still gets a 6 from me for the idea and overall good photography.
Very creative, and this came up for me right after the Baby Monitor with a similar effect. I'm wondering how this would work with the patch stuck on eyeglasses to cover up the edges and slip the hand, or at least fingers, under the right lens.
Neat idea! You may get comments that the eye is too apparently cut out and pasted on, but that's what I think is pretty cool about it. And it's very well positioned, too. Good choice to make it B&W.
Wow! VERY creative. Worthy of the front page. Just wish you'd have checked for stray hairs before shooting. Especially the one sticking out of her left eye and from her nose...