Interesting idea. An antique! But I think some additional lighting on the front of the razor may have made it pop more and improved this shot. Also, the angle is too tame, maybe a bit more tilt would have increased the dynamics.
I like the idea. Would have been more striking with lower lighting so we could see the detail on the razor blade.
Is that sensor dust on the left or was it on the background?
Nice shot by the way.