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I like how you captured the liveliness of the dancer in this shot. The problem is, the kids are all looking in the other direction at something else. The moms behind the kids are talking to each other and also not looking at your subject, the dancing man. What this does is take the viewer's eye away from your subject. The person with the floral shirt at the side of the frame is cut off too much to add any focus or interest. If you had positioned yourself more to the right of the man, facing the people who are watching him, it would have made for a more telling shot. You could try cropping out the kids,moms, and floral shirt person but I'm not sure that would be much more succesful as it would leave the dancer without context. One last nit; your title Purple Haze, doesn't say much without your explanation. You might want to consider changing it to something that makes sense to a viewer without an explanation (The Wedding Singer, for example). |
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