Good Lord! I thought the title was probably overkill, even for DPC! How wrong I was. Maybe you should have drawn a big red ring around each of the two gestures. And written "Duh!" in the margin.
"The lady in front really kills the shot..."
"Model should have been on the right side..."
"...girl is out of focus" Oh dear, oh dear.
Unwitting visual parody ... it just keeps on giving on the Street, doesn't it?.
This is a good one. I'm disappointed that the title was necessary, but I suppose that you are as well.
Heehee...I see your flash reflection.This is interesting. Love the window items, but very hard to see with the blinds. Perhaps shorten your DOF to somewhat blur the blinds and the woman out front. Nice idea, definitely.
I don't know. The lighting is fantastic. the bw is terrific. The slats and the mannequin pose perfect. But the lady in front really kills the shot for me.