Greetings from the Critique Club...
I was not able to vote on this challenge, but if I had, I probably would have given you a 4 or 5.
My first few thoughts are 1) I cannot find the personifcation, and 2) the white balance needs to be corrected. The composition is good and you've chosen a good shutter speed to capture the motion of the hammer. In the end however, it looks like your score was affected by the fact you chose to portray an emotion, as opposed to showing emotion through an inanimate object.
If you need any clarification on any of my comments, please feel free to pm me. It might take some time for me to get back to you. |