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Well, to start, I'll say that your light is interesting. An interesting use of foreground bokeh as well. Your overall composition is a bit boring. There is really nothing there to catch attention. Perhaps if there were certain keys that were in the focal plane, it would be a bit better. It just seems uninspired. Your focus is a bit soft as well. When I see a photo, I search for a focal point where the subject can be studied. This leaves me a bit lost in the frame. Perhaps a higher DOF would have worked here to bring more of the bg into focus. Anyway, good luck in the challenge. :) |
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