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Your focus is great. I find that the dog so tightly fitted into the frame does not do the game he is playing justice. In order to convey a sense of fun, you really have to have a sense of movement and energy. This might have been achieved by panning out on the shot a bit to capture more of the dog in the frame so we can see what he is doing and positioning him on the right side of the frame to give him something to move into. This would have been a good place to use a little fill flash as well. It would have enabled you to balance the shadows in the front with the light in the back. While his face is properly exposed, the back of his head, his back, and some of the light in the bg is blown out. Good luck in the challenge :) |