Don't you wonder what secrets these walls hold? The old school house is boarded up now after being the central meeting place for generations of families in Red Canyon. The walls are crumbling. The metal covering the wooden doorway is rusted through. The gravel road in front of the school house leads through ranchland in the canyon to Red Canyon Park.
Statistics
Place: 122 out of 443 Avg (all users): 5.4930 Avg (commenters): 6.0714 Avg (participants): 5.4859 Avg (non-participants): 5.5046 Views since voting: 1147 Votes: 286 Comments: 16 Favorites: 1 (view)
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 5
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 7
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 7
How well does it meet the challenge: 10
Total Averaged Rating 7.25 Dick
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 6
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 5
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc. 4
How well does it meet the challenge: 7
Total Averaged Rating(Rounded) 6
this is filled with lines, textures, colors, shadows for the eye to wander...the only small question would be whether a tighter crop at the top would have "cleaned" the overall design up...very nice
The subject fits the challenge, but I think that the door is too high in the picture. I
would have either moved in closer. and lost some of the steps, or further away
so tha t the door could be more central. Just my opinion.
Like this entry. Would of liked to see the bottom cropped a bit tighter along with the left side to force the eye more on the door and stone wall. Nice work ..good luck.
Add photograph to your favorites
Add photographer to your favorites
Photographer found comment helpful.
