LOL - You know, if I was still working hard at Critique Club stuff, I'd have to consult my Thesaurus to come up with, (er) constructive comments on this one.
Yep, this is a great example. Thanks for showing it.
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PS. The spider web, yeah, the spider web. We'd talk about that.
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This is going to sound harsh, but if you'd spent as much time on the focus as you did on the borderyou could have had and interesting subject. Use a tripod if you have trouble with focus. I would also have included the entire can, not just he greased lip. Whatever the red things are along the top are very distracting as well. Better luck next time.
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 6
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 5
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 2
How well does it meet the challenge: 7
Total Averaged Rating 5.00 Dick
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, etc. 4
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 5
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 5
Does this picture meet the challenge?(5pts) Yes
Total Challenge Weighted Average 5 Bill
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 5
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 6
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc. 3
How well does it meet the challenge: 6
Total Averaged Rating(Rounded) 5
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