Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 6
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 4
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 5
How well does it meet the challenge: 10
Total Averaged Rating 6.25 Dick
The "subject" seems to be out of focus. Overall, I don't find this shot very interesting. Maybe a different perspective, like from a lower angle would add some interest to this shot.
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 6
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 3
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc. 5
How well does it meet the challenge: 7
Total Averaged Rating(Rounded) 5
The DOF you chose would have been better utilized if the screw had been in sharper focus. That's the reason for the 3 rating in the technical category. Hope this is helpful.
Sorry, but I just can't come to like this photo. I think it has a lot to do with the blurriness of the screw. Change that and I think it would have been a great pic.
the screw is out of focus.. i dont know if thats what you were going for...but i would have liked it better with the screw in focus...and maybe closer up would have made a much more interesting photo
The composition is nice, the lighting is nice, the DOF is nice, but the subject is badliy out of focus. That cost quite a few points. This is digital -- shoot unitl it's right!!
Looks like you might have just missed the focus area. Otherwise this would have been a great example of how to do a texture shot and have a point for the eye to focus on (that just so happens to be perfectly placed in the ROT position.) Very good effort.
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