Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 6
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 7
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 6
How well does it meet the challenge: 9
Total Averaged Rating 7.00 Dick
Very nice shot. Unfortunately, a lot of distracting elements. I would like it much better with cropping on left and right exactly where rails disappear from view.
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 6
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 5
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc. 5
How well does it meet the challenge: 7
Total Averaged Rating(Rounded) 6
i would like this a lot more if it was a little more simple, like not as much grass in the ties, the stuff on the right, and the little poles. but i like it :-)
I like your concept on this one, but you do have quite a bit of extra information here. Because the center of interest is the rustiness of the rails, it would have been fun to see a more concentrated look at them leaving out the flowers, trees & machinery. Nevertheless, this is a good take on the Challenge. Good luck!
A nice choice of perspective - lead-in lines from both sides of the bottom. Exposure looks to be right on. The white sky draws attention away from your subject.
nice lines. interesting shot. The little trees at the end ad some, but the tower to the right is a little bit distracting, along with a lot of negative space with the sky. I was looking at this while scrolling down, and if you stop (the upper edge) just at the edge where the tracks are curving out to the sides(right at the bottom of the tree) to me, this would make a great composition, especially in this topic.
I think it would have been a better shot had you got in closer on the tracks and perhaps further back so the background isn't as visible as it is. The post on the right is distracting as are the small trees.
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