I would prefer this without the figures closest to the camera. They take up a great portion of the photo and are quite blurry, distracing from the main subject which appears to be the bunny in the middle. The focus on the rabbit in the middle is good, and you light source seems to work for the shot. Just a bit busy for my eyes. Good luck in the challenge. ~Hbunch7187~
The blurred frontpeice cuts across a bit too much. See how the green/black thing in the top left is framing? I'd have gone with something like that in the bottom right instead.
The lighting is good and the selective focus, however the blurred part of the image at the front and right seem distracting. It might have been more effectively framed with less (if any) of the green at the right.