Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 4
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 7
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 10
How well does it meet the challenge: 10
Total Averaged Rating 7.75 Dick
I feel that a lot could be done with this scene to improve its impact upon the viewer. Different angles with less distracting items would be one way. It looks like the lighting was superb, what a great photo op. Keep shootin'
Very nice. I would crop out Nearly everything above the highest point on roof, everything to the left and right of roof. The extraneous details detract from a what is a wonderful vintage scene. I would also like to have seen a longer exposure. There is not much moving here.
A 5. Much higher if brighter and less distractions.
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 6
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 7
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc. 6
How well does it meet the challenge: 7
Total Averaged Rating(Rounded) 7
Man, how I miss my Dr. Pepper, nice pic. Only wish you could have left that pole out of the right side, as it blends into the roof, making the building behind not look as sharp as it should.
Cropping out more of the sky would help to keep the focu on the subjects more. I found that bright sky distracting from the image, which otherwise has many points of interest.