Challenge:Rusted (Basic Editing I) Camera:Sony DSC-P31 Location: Bosnia and Hercegovina, Sarajevo, Date: May 3, 2004 Aperture: 2.9 ISO: 100 Shutter: 1/125 Galleries:Performance Date Uploaded: May 3, 2004
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 7
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 6
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 8
How well does it meet the challenge: 8
Total Averaged Rating 7.25 Dick
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 6
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 5
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc. 6
How well does it meet the challenge: 3
Total Averaged Rating(Rounded) 5
I see one tiny oriface on the helicopter that could possibly be rusty. Also the image is slightly over exposed and has some colour cast. You can find some very good tutorials here: //epaperpress.com/psphoto/index.html
You might find that by blurring the background a bit using aperature setting, you could emphasize the subject... The background is a bit distracting...