Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 6
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 4
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc. 5
How well does it meet the challenge: 7
Total Averaged Rating(Rounded) 6
Slight colour cast/overexposure.
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 5
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 6
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 3
How well does it meet the challenge: 6
Total Averaged Rating 5 Dick
Though you've limited the depth of field the background is still a distraction. Seems a little overexposed, too. There's a nice sculptural feel to the subject, just think it needs to improve on the technique.
Its a little flat on colors, and overexposured there at the end f this thing, The background seems a little disturbing too, Good composition though, Good luck :)
This has got to be one of the best photo's I have ever seen in my life. The DoF is fantastic, the lighting is perfect. It tells a story, this is about an elderly couple who have been together for over 50 years in marital bliss, yes they have seen hard times, but through the good and bad they have created a bond that no one can break. This must be on my living room wall !!