This is a little distrurbing... but as far as technicality goes... She's got a lot of make up on, perhaps a more closed aperture or despeckle(after-effect) could've been applied to not make her skin look so made up/harsh.
To me the lighting is to bright. It lets me see to much like the makeup she is wearing. She doesn't really look like she doesnt have control, because of her eyes. Try thinking more on a positive side. we have to much of this stuff in reality. Why do we need to see it in pictures? Vote 6 Sonifo
Good use of the lighting. I like the colors a lot. I really don't like the composition of this picture at all. But that's only part of it. Photographically, I think it's pretty good with the possible exception of your light being a bit too bright. Good luck - Inspzil
You could have left untitles and probably done better. I don't understand the whole thing. BUT it is a good shot. Realistic features almost looks live. Texture of the face giving way to the ear is really good. Like I said. What's in the title?
Wow, so not me (bondage, that is), but still not in control. Good clear shot, do ppl really "get into" this stuff? I'll try to get over my predjudges and bump you up to a 7. Swash
can't wait to see the comments you get on this one. what an understanding model you have, or maybe you're just a real charmer. i convinced a girl to let me photograph her bosom for the lust picture, but this is really off the hook. only thing that could make it stronger is if she had a bead or two of sweat on her forehead. the drool's a nice touch. best of luck.
I'm sure you'll get tons of bad remarks for this controversial shot (controversial for this site). I personally don't mind these shots. It might have been better in B&W though because the lighting seems a bit strong ont he face and the colors are a bit dull. Nicely framed shot. 7
The subject is titilating, perhabs. The lighting is drawing attention to the fact that this is not a pretty girl. we can see that she has applied heavy foundation and eyeliner. The effect is one of pathos but I don't get a sense of deliberate irony. rather, you really just wanted an excuse to submit lite porn.