This was taken on my way to school (Technion - I.I.T), there's a construction site on the way, these bars were hanging in the air, so I took some shots.
The DOF is very interesting on this - it really becomes something of an optical illusion. I enjoy the texture of the rebar compared to the flat color of the sky. The composition is not terribly interesting to me, but your technique is very good.
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 5
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 6
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 3
How well does it meet the challenge: 10
Total Averaged Rating 6.00 Dick
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 7
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 7
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc. 5
How well does it meet the challenge: 7
Total Averaged Rating(Rounded) 7
I really like how the rusty bars stand out on this! Good choice of DOF. Could have been a little better with more subject matter IMO. Still a great shot!
i like this composition. the sky background is very nice. did you have flash on? if not, try it in bright light, it can help remove unwanted shadowing, bringing out more detail.
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