Looks good in b/w. Very random splat pattern. I don't know if the cropping works, however. I think if the splat was positioned higher in the image and if it was cropped more evenly it would look much better. Or if the photograph was taken level and then rotated, say, 45 degrees...might look good, too. Also, rule of thirds.
The dead centered white paint splotch isn't doing much for me. Perhaps if you had framed it so it was off center and coming from a corner of the frame. It might have been interesting, for instance, to have the white lines radiating from the top left corner of the frame.
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