Interesting use of shallow DOF. It might have worked better if only one point was in the band of actual focus. The additional points of focus are a bit distracting. Also, the transition from focus to out of focus seems a bit abrupt. Maybe having a background that was slightly less blurred would of helped. 6
There isn't a lot going on here. There is good use of negative and positive space and the colors harmonize but the grainy quality isn't working hard enough and those hot spots are just distracting.