Challenge:Rusted (Basic Editing I) Camera:Konica KD-400Z Location: 6th Av. Manhattan, New York Date: Apr 29, 2004 Aperture: 1:4,9 ISO: 100 Shutter: 1/132s Galleries:Architecture, Water Date Uploaded: May 2, 2004
Nice lively picture. For my taste If you have intensified the color of the rust, it is a bit too much. Looks artificial. I like the composition and the movement of the water.
The splashing or falling water makes the image very busy --- perhaps a very high shutter speed with a strong flash would stop the action, making a sharper image?
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 10
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 9
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 9
How well does it meet the challenge: 10
Total Averaged Rating 9.50 Dick
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 6
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 6
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc. 5
How well does it meet the challenge: 7
Total Averaged Rating(Rounded) 6
I really like the colours and movement within this image. The right hand pole is a little out of focus to me, but I don't think this detracts from the whole feeling of movement in the picture. Very nice.
This is an excellent image! The movement of the water creates the interaction with the rusty columns to make this a truly exciting photograph. Good luck. 9
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