look at you trying these tricky shots! I have not tried anything like this yet and don't really know how to do it.
I think the voters pretty much called out the main detraction - the blur. And I have nooooooo clue as to what is involved in getting the focus on something like this.
It looks like you had captured something really gorgeous here. The billow of smoke and the lighting on it is beautiful! I love the title too.
So when you figure out how you get something like this in focus, let me know. I'd like to learn too!