I can't see a relationship to the challenge, and don't quite understand the composition as well. Did you need the small jar and two candles? I dont' think so. Also the line marking the corner in the wall is distracting. 2
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 4
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 7
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 3
How well does it meet the challenge: 0
Total Averaged Rating 3.50 Dick
I see no rust or enen rust of another type(like plant rust). Sorry
Where is the rust?! I would score this higher if it fit the challege. Too many elements in this picture are out of focus. I would recommend either increasing the depth of field to have the jars in focus or remove them and reframe the shot to emphasize just the vase and the flower.
There's no rust, at least that I can pick out in a black and white photo. wilted, yet. Rusted, no. Why black and white? Technically good, but my vote will be low.
I'm guessing you just want comments on your photo. Really you would be far better off posting it in the Forum. The only comments you'll get here are 'does not meet the challenge'
I'm interested in the idea behind this. I can't understand the significance to the challenge in this case. Using black & white was a good choice for this composition.
Maybe it's just me, but I don't really see how this incorporates the challenge theme. That said, the elements of composition, lighting and focus fall short. I think it would have been much more effective without the glass, etc. on lower left. With a darker background it would have had some impact. I wouldn't mind the white container being a little fuzzy since your flower is sharp. The jar, etc. are distracting. With a black background it might look quite nice.
Where is the rust? I am not particular about the rustiness, but I don't get this one. And as a shot, it is out of focus with no real focal point for me. Very nice light on the flower, though and crips contrast there.
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 6
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 7
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc. 4
How well does it meet the challenge: 0
Total Averaged Rating(Rounded) 4
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