You give a guy a tough job when you ask for a critique of an abstract. I could tell you that there are blown out details, and you could respond that that was your intention. Lack of detail is sometimes the strength of an abstract.
Emotionally, this image doesn't speak to me. But I'm not a bigot when it comes to art. Your statement escapes me, but others have found your image compelling. Good for you! If this image only speaks to you, it is fine by me.
Technically, I have two comments. Crop Unedited a little tighter. The most distracting element is the hint of blue in the lower right corner. I also object to your filter application. It is way to strong for my eyes. It kind of makes me feel that this patchwork filter was applied only to hide the other deficiencies of the shot.
Not the most creative submission in the challenge. If it were so small one couldn't see the dots, perhaps it would be more appealing, but it looks like one is standing too close to a TV screen.
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