IMHO it is not recommendable to present an image out of focus. When having such an obvious basic problem, you can only expect comments on that, and we miss the rest of your content.
focusing is out.. I'll give you a tip on using torchlight to photograph a subject.. Switch the main light on, FOCUS with the big light on, hold your position, switch the light off then take your photo.. camera focus MUCH better if you give them lots of light..
Technically correct (exposure, focus, etc.) 5 Good composition. 5 Tells a story or creates a mood 5 High impact to the viewer 5 Exemplifies the theme of the Challenge 6 total 6 Sulamk