Meets the challenge, works as an abstract, and my only suggestion is to take a few more shots varying where the background lines show up and see what happens. As it is, they are moving downhill to the right and may have been better to be more horizontal.
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 4
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 6
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 5
How well does it meet the challenge: 10
Total Averaged Rating 6.25 Dick
Slightly unlevel background lines are real distracting.
Nice composition, very crisp and graphic. I don't know if it's legal, but when "cropping" the image in photoshop, you can correct perspective problems (the un-level lines in the background) by making a selection, then chosing "Free Transform" then holding the command-key (or control on a PC) down when you drag one of the handles -- this will allow you to distort the image non-uniformly. Since it doesn't involve a mask, and you can get the selection by doing "select all", it should be legal.
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 5
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 4
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc. 5
How well does it meet the challenge: 7
Total Averaged Rating(Rounded) 5
Nice composition and nice shot, would have been great if the background would have been a bit darker. But if there was sun outside then it would have been diffucult to do that.
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