What a cool study in contrasts. The slumpish seasoned fellow, the beefy younger guy, and then the title in the picture leaving everything open for interpretation. This is a very interesting catch!
I know that you used the right of the frame to help with your title, but if you crop that and have a square crop, you have a stronger human interest shot.
This one struck me right away. Your title adds, but the picture really does carry on its own just fine. I do like the composition - not just for the words in the window, but the cartoon dolls as well. Really a nice shot, nice processing to support it as well.